Awareness
Awareness
by: Missbeenaroundtheworld
When you take the wrong turn
Thinking that it’s right
You’ll feel yourself burn
- Hard to see the light.
Take a while and breathe
Look around and see
(Before you leave)
“Everything’s not about me”
Whether you're blue
Whether you're glad
If your problems stick like glue
That’s no reason to be bad.
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